Your gong fu has a lot of good and bad points, but I'd like to draw particular attention to problems in your footwork.
你的功夫优点和缺点并存,但我希望你能特别要注意你的步法。
and without giving any consideration to the effects produced on the individuals and on their descendants by the artificial mode of existence imposed by the factory.
工厂把一种人为的生存方式强加给工人,却不顾及这种生存方式给工人及其后代带来的影响。